Slave to Love for Prompt 75, Influence of the Dark Side

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Image credit: en.wikipedia.org

I feast on your desires like scraps from a wretched beggar’s table. In this I
am a myriad of choices to acquiesce and follow and
become the thing I once most despised; this insipid, crawling
death of sensibility and morality, and in
the depths of this depravity my pointless acts are yet the
destroyer of all sensibility, of honour and
of duty. But yet for one brief moment in your gaze I bequeath all my
worlds at your feet, a humble slave to your un-ending greed.

(c) Helen Valentina 2014, All Rights Reserved

‘I am become Death, the destroyer of Worlds’ The Bhagavad Gita

For mindlovemisery’s prompt at: http://mindlovemiserysmenagerie.wordpress.com/2014/10/05/prompt-75-influence-the-dark-side/

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Precarious

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Image credit: theinspirationroom.com

I’m balancing precariously
Embracing life’s uncertainty
Preparing for adversity
But praying for the sun
I’ll bet on my capacity
To sell my true diversity
To finally find the place for me
To let my spirit run

My life’s become hilarity
I find no linearity
There is no similarity
With all that I’d begun
And now in perpetuity
I live with incongruity
This may yet be the death of me
These miles that I must run

(c) Helen Valentina 2014, All Rights Reserved

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Lonely Goal

Just one drop within the sea
Merge with All so endlessly
Mermaids whisper, return to me
Return to me

Just one star within the sky
Multi faceted pinpoint eye
Gone already, it’s just a lie
Just a lie

Just one grain upon the shore
Trapped in beige forevermore
Assimilate all I adore
All I adore

Just one leaf in forest green
Like such grace as might have been
What we were is never seen
Never seen

In the many merge a soul
Consciousness relinquished whole
Illuminate the lonely goal
The lonely goal

(c) Helen Valentina 2014, All Rights Reserved

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Light

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Image credit: wallpaperhere.com

The quality of light here is sublime
Trickling as golden liquor cross the field
Starlight could not leave the warmer day
But lingers hidden in the weave of sunshine’s charm

The shadows are more dappled in such light
They gently caress the happy passer-by
A slaking of a deeper, unknown thirst
As these sentinels protect the sunlit realm

The song of angels blanketing the sky
Of even those in doubt would yet hold sway
The glory of such nature tells its tale
Of perfect light on such a perfect day

(c) Helen Valentina 2014, All Rights Reserved

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Reaching for Photo Challenge 28 Climbing the Walls

Image Credit : Laura A Lord - at:  ghost-of-a-gone-girl@DeviantArt

Image Credit : Laura A Lord – at: ghost-of-a-gone-girl@DeviantArt

I can hear you
Dear departed summer boy
You’re trickling up and down these walls
With every jagged breath
My wretched heart calls
And I’m floating
Not afraid that I may fall

I can touch you
Ephemeral as summer rain
Like electricity beneath my palms
I’m trembling now
No whispers can calm
I’m just climbing
While sensations swiftly swarm

I can taste you
Salt from tears upon my skin
Behind these walls your hunger waits
And with each moment
My fears abate
I’m just praying
That my revelation’s not too late

I can reach you
Climbing walls to heaven’s door
As I levitate my soul is trying
Inch by inch
All gravity defying
And as we touch
My soul resplendent, falls here sighing

(c) Helen Valentina 2014, All Rights Reserved

For mindlovemisery’s prompt at: http://mindlovemiserysmenagerie.wordpress.com/2014/09/30/photo-challenge-28-climbing-the-walls-2/

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Heaviness of Air

He felt the heaviness of air
Bearing down much more than gravity
Elusive oppression stifling
Upon his shoulders as a weight

Waiting a moment on the stair
Remembering light, a lover’s eyes
So many years, a century
As finer feelings turn to hate

In the midst of such despair
His aging bones recall embrace
The gifts that he would yet bestow
These moments that are far too late

And what did she declare?
Such words as often said in haste
In absence now what memory left?
Just the heaviness of air

(c) Helen Valentina 2014, All Rights Reserved

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Too Sweet for Prompt 74 The Hollow Men by TS Elliot

Image credit: Richard Keeling

Image credit: Richard Keeling

I have stepped across this threshold
Mr Devil I can see you
In that shrunken blackened doorway
See your bony hand there beckoning
Like a tide returning to the beach
I hear your slyly sibilant, silent speech
Making promises, and beguiling me, too sweet, too sweet

Moments ago it seemed I floated
On such a red river of my making
Swirls of scarlet colouring transparency
Water-borne such acts of wilfulness
A true and so inviolate choice
To my sickened soul comes another voice
Dried leaves falling in these autumn days too sweet, too sweet

I am witness to such truth now
Such as they whispered in their huddled halls
On this barren shore you fashion
Out of sticks and stones and even bones
Your expectations, so that you meet
The thing you most believe you’ll greet
And for me it must be nothingness, too sweet, too sweet

But still I’ve stepped across the threshold
Drawing angels down like fireflies
Beating wings above me, far too celestial
They just flicker in the lamplight
I’m realising now I can’t belong
But my drowning needs are far too strong
So my soul’s just stuffing, filling voids too sweet, too sweet

(c) Helen Valentina 2014, All Rights Reserved

For mindlovemisery’s prompt at: http://mindlovemiserysmenagerie.wordpress.com/2014/09/28/prompt-74-the-hollow-men-t-s-elliot/

What a treat to have as inspiration one of the greatest poems of all time. Of course, one can’t presume to ever reach its brilliance, but the landscape of existence – if such exists – after death is a profound concept and a terrifyingly wonderful one too.  🙂

Oh,and I had to use the same image as she did – it’s brilliant and perfect for both the original poem and anything it might inspire.

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Echoes on the Breeze – Ann Bagnall’s wonderful new book of poetry

Last week I received my copy of Ann Bagnall’s ‘Echoes on The Breeze’ , a wonderful collection of her micropoetry now published by lulu.com.  See her wonderful blog and the link to the book at: http://annieb222.com/2014/09/13/echoes-on-the-breeze-by-ann-bagnall-paperback-lulu-au/

That link is for the paperback but her blog has another post with a link for the ebook available at Lulu also.

I will say at the outset. Ann if one of my dearest friends of many years, but that is not why I bought the book or why I write about it now. I did both because she is a superb writer, with a style and a sensibility that is very rare.

This book is deceptively simple – a series of her micro-poetry, none titled, one by one on small white pages. But within the simplicity is the complexity, the depth, and the poetry found.

Ann writes eloquently and often of love, and the beauty of the poems on that theme are resonant and there is much to enjoy for those in love, or in love with love, in her poems on this theme in this work. And beyond that theme she writes of life in a completely original way.

For me, it is the timeless strangeness in her work that really touches my soul. I love writing that takes you to another place, makes you see things completely differently, gives you that ‘ah ha!’ moment when you think ‘of course, of course, that is right, why didn’t I see that before?’, or even more strangely and wonderfully that sense you have entered another strange, dread, terrible, wonderful world where everything is heightened and also delicate. Ann’s writing is like that.

To fully convey this I am taking a liberty of reproducing a small amount of the writing in this review for illustrative purposes (Ann – I hope that is ok with you but what better way to convey the impact of your writing than with your writing?)

So, for instance, just ‘feel’ this poem from her collection:

He finds the silence
After heavy rain
Makes him wake in the night
Wondering
If the halls of heaven
Empty
Have fallen to echoes’

After reading it I am in quiet contemplation of the emptied. echoing halls of heaven. Who thinks like that? Well, Ann does, and it’s a treasure. Another example, a brief snippet from another of her poems:

The colour of the morning
Is always painted
On darkness’

And I’m thinking, of course, that is so right, and immediately I’m transported to the very earliest hours of dawn, watching that colour paint the sky as she so vividly describes with such delicate economy of words. Or a few more snippets from her poems as examples:

Thoughts of deeper things
And silver whispers
Creep across the clouds’

How wonderfully strange, trippy and kind of dread! Or:

‘The fireflies are whispering
The secrets of the moon’

And then I want to know the moon’s secrets, but with piquant regret realise I never will. Or a last example:

 ‘In the silence of the night
They whisper
Like the sand speaks to the sea’

And I’m on a beach at dawn, straining to hear the words of the sand to the sea. Just perfect!

The thing is, what I love about Ann’s writing is what I love about music and lyrics when they combine perfectly to take you to another dimension, another head space, another spiritual realm. And that’s the thing, finally, for me, Ann’s writing is inherently melodic and deep.

I cannot recommend this book highly enough. Ann’s style is uniquely hers and worth wide readership and treasuring. I hope by my humble review here I introduce her to new readers and that they too can enjoy her work in this work and at her blog.

Cheers

Helen V

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Distraction

I need centring
I need control
I’m just avoiding
All I must do
I love distraction
Soothes my soul
Makes me forget I
Must follow through

I’m writing poems
When yet instead
I should be drafting
Something more
All that’s creative
Fills my head
All that’s work is
Just a bore

I should be focussed
I should produce
I should not linger
At these keys
I love distraction
It has such use
Makes me cling to
Just what I please

(c) Helen Valentina 2014, All Rights Reserved

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Coffee

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Image credit: en.wikipedia.org

My coffee is cold
Winter creeps across my threshold
With its stories and its laments
I am quite wired but still so tired
Growing old

My coffee is cold
Like the soul within I’ve sold
With its memories and tragedies
Still regretted, often fretted
Left untold

My coffee is cold
With so little left to hold
The grounds here gently darkening
Nothing stirring, no thoughts occurring
Nothing bold

(c) Helen Valentina 2014, All Rights Reserved

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