I apologise
For speaking truth
I apologise
For giving proof
I apologise
I deep regret
I showed my hand
I deep regret
I understand
I deep regret
Forgive me now
For being right
Forgive me now
For I can’t quite
Forgive me now
(c) Helen Valentina 2014, All Rights Reserved
[ Smiles ] This is another great poem!
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Love the repetition. Makes me think about how often we have to apologize for speaking our mind.
Very true, that’s exactly what inspired it actually, thanks Charles!! š
This poem should be tattooed on my forehead, would save me time. Great job expressing the frustration and how futile our path can feel at times
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Repetition always carries a strength Helen, you have used it very well.
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I can so imagine situations and conversations to precede this. š
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haven’t we all been there – good write Helen. š
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Ahhh⦠being “right” is not always what it’s cracked up to beā¦.
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Reblogged this on Women Who Think Too Much by Jeanne Marie and commented:
Sometimes even when you are right, you are wrong…
This amazingly insightful….I love this!! ā¤
Thanks so much dear sis!! :). Xxxx
Very nice.
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