Beauty Ages

Beauty ages so
The cultural rules apply
We will not deny

The face forms hollows
The lines of age hold their sway
On too soon a day

Beauty ages all
The finest flower in time
Loses her sweet prime

And here we are cruel
Where once we held so high
Turn and just deny

Β© Helen Valentina 2014, All Rights Reserved

About helenvalentina

Like most people, I have a number of sides to me. The most interesting one probably emerges through my writing, hence this blog. I love to read, and also to write, and so this is a way to share both.
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35 Responses to Beauty Ages

  1. I have determined to love each and every wrinkle and each and every gray. They may be coming too soon…but, it is happening to all the best people I know. πŸ™‚ I am in good company. Love you, Sis!!

  2. But for those who love
    Wrinkles add, not detract
    A dream? No, just plain fact.

    πŸ™‚

  3. drminna says:

    Amazing!
    I’ve nominated you for The Field of Flowers Award. Congratulations! For details see the link:
    http://drminna.wordpress.com/2014/02/27/field-of-flowers-award/

  4. Elaine says:

    Love it and I treasure every one of my wrinkles and gray hairs and the white ones too! I earned every one of them! lol Keep trying to convince myself that I am darned lucky to be this old and look this good! A girl can dream right?

  5. sknicholls says:

    I am determined to grow old gracefully, even if my midriff refuses to comply.

  6. as much as times I look in the mirror and ask where did I go, I would rather that than the knife and end up looking like a cat πŸ˜‰

  7. Vanity… I’m afraid, is one thing that likely causes the most issues with people, especially women. Too bad that most do not see the beauty of their snowy crowns or the lines on their faces that displays wisdom of a life well-lived instead of something that needs to be covered up, sucked out, surgically removed, etc….

    Very nice writing Sis xxxx

  8. If only the beholders could age with the beauty and truly see how much more beautiful those character marks and especially what lies beneath make it. πŸ™‚

  9. I saw an article on a book that I would like to own where they took pictures of these beautiful vivacious women who were older. Grandmother age. The book had quotes and little snippets about each woman they were some of the most beautiful women I have seen. They had a sense of self and confidence younger women don’t possess

  10. Mike says:

    A perfect series of continuous thought that exposes the thesis eloquently. Nicely done Helen.

  11. Himani B says:

    this is so lovely Helen! as long as it represents a life well lived, its all good I guess πŸ™‚ aging and being the victim of time is inevitable..gotta make the best of it!

  12. surprisebjg says:

    How lovely and true you are amazing!

  13. VOID RPG says:

    This is wonderful, Helen. I am so impressed with your writing! When are you compiling these into a book? o_-

  14. lly1205 says:

    I’m intrigued to see what ageing will be like in the future, but probably because I’m assuming that where lifespans have already increased quality of life will come to increase too. Fingers crossed…

    Lily

  15. It’s great to realize that a time we called that time will one day come.

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