Forever Now

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May we have forever now?
Before the light of youth
Has dimmed our eyes
Or the touch of love
Has lost its sighs
May we have forever now?

May we have forever now?
A moment captured
In all time
To give this poet
A true rhyme
May we have forever now?

May we have forever now?
May our age
Prove like fine wine
A greater bond
A stronger twine
May we have forever now?

© Helen Valentina 2013, All Rights Reserved

About Helen

I'm drawn to blogging as a way to share ideas and consider what makes us who we are. Whether it's in our working life or our creativity, expression is a means to connect.
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13 Responses to Forever Now

  1. robertsonwrites says:

    Sometimes, it seems that forever never comes.

  2. We all have a longing for forever, trouble is we are human and humans don’t always work forever. i think you have hit on a subject we all wish for Helen. Very excellent!!

  3. Jade Reyner says:

    What is forever? It could be subjective. It could be a lifetime, it could be a matter of hours. I love that you have opened up this idea in this poem. Lovely. 🙂

  4. Forever till the end of this day, this week, this year, eternity? How nice it would be if forever could happen in some things ~ but not in all. Interesting piece Helen.

  5. You can have forever now, but it will only last a moment. 🙂

  6. Adam Hughes says:

    Beautiful 🙂 Making each moment count!

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