Storm Season

Lightning storm over the Caribbean

Lightning storm over the Caribbean (Photo credit: Wikipedia)

You are storm season
Electricity crackling
On a dry, grey afternoon sky
Distant rumbling
Of thunder
Like chariots passing by
You are storm season

You are lightning striking
Lone tree hill
An exclamation point as highlight
Terrible truth
Rising within you
We’re all lost in this night
You are lightning striking

You are devastation
After the flood
Ravaged the townships so far below
Miserable knowledge
Known far too late
As your true meaning came to be known
You are devastation

Β© Helen Valentina 2013 All Rights Reserved

About helenvalentina

Like most people, I have a number of sides to me. The most interesting one probably emerges through my writing, hence this blog. I love to read, and also to write, and so this is a way to share both.
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13 Responses to Storm Season

  1. Wonderful imagery Helen, you put me there, well done.

  2. Noora says:

    Exquisite! Love the imagery.

  3. I loved it. The ferocity of the verses and the imagery- great job! πŸ™‚
    -HA

  4. Make one want to have a boat ready.

  5. CultFit says:

    Vivid, surreal imagery – Love it!

  6. Excellent imagery and I can almost feel the static in the air! xxx

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