Lost at sea
Adrift for days
I seek an albatross
To light my way
The water here’s
Too rank to drink
Voices murmur
Won’t let me think
I’ve navigated
Until I’m lost
On storm swept seas
I’m cruelly tossed
I spoke your name
I broke that vow
I’m lost at sea
No rescue now
(c) Helen Valentina 2013, All Rights Reserved
Nice one!
Thank you!! 🙂 🙂
I always awe the way you handle your rhymes to create a full,enveloping atmosphere.
Thank you, wow, that is so very kind!! 🙂
That’ll teach you for not replacing the batteries in the GPS.
LOL, very true!! 🙂
Beautiful, Sis!
Thank you!!! 🙂 🙂
“I’ve navigated
Until I’m lost” don’t you hate that feeling…
Yep, it’s not a good feeling at all!! 🙂 🙂
Amazing work again, Helen! It’s always a pleasure to read your poetry.
Thank you so much, that is so kind! 🙂 🙂