Lost At Sea

Posted on June 22, 2013 by
Sea

Sea (Photo credit: Moyan_Brenn)

Lost at sea
Adrift for days
I seek an albatross
To light my way
The water here’s
Too rank to drink
Voices murmur
Won’t let me think

I’ve navigated
Until I’m lost
On storm swept seas
I’m cruelly tossed
I spoke your name
I broke that vow
I’m lost at sea
No rescue now

(c) Helen Valentina 2013, All Rights Reserved

About Helen

I'm drawn to blogging as a way to share ideas and consider what makes us who we are. Whether it's in our working life or our creativity, expression is a means to connect.
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12 Responses to Lost At Sea

  2. Oloriel says:
    June 22, 2013 at 8:39 pm

    I always awe the way you handle your rhymes to create a full,enveloping atmosphere.

    Reply
  3. Brian Hughes says:
    June 22, 2013 at 9:52 pm

    That’ll teach you for not replacing the batteries in the GPS.

    Reply
  5. Wordifull Melanie says:
    June 23, 2013 at 5:43 pm

    “I’ve navigated
    Until I’m lost” don’t you hate that feeling…

    Reply
  6. Noora says:
    June 23, 2013 at 8:24 pm

    Amazing work again, Helen! It’s always a pleasure to read your poetry.

    Reply

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