At First Sight

By Pale Moonlight

By Pale Moonlight (Photo credit: nightchrome)

A lover’s sigh now
On your lips

At first sight
An angel’s wings spread
Bringing light

Hold your breath
For fear these moments
Pass too soon

The sunlight
Is eclipsed now by
Pale, bright moon

© Helen Valentina 2014, All Rights Reserved

About Helen

I'm drawn to blogging as a way to share ideas and consider what makes us who we are. Whether it's in our working life or our creativity, expression is a means to connect.
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17 Responses to At First Sight

  1. Morgan says:

    So Beautiful, Helen 🙂 Just Love it!

  2. Brenda says:

    This is beautiful. Like a breath of clean air after smelling smog for days. 🙂

  3. Truly lovely, Sis! I needed to read this kind of beauty today!! 🙂

  4. Nice, even at first sight. 🙂 (Btw, your title gives me an idea for a post…)

  5. Noora says:

    This is so stunning piece, Helen. 🙂

  6. Angela says:

    Beautiful poem! I just love your first stanza; the word awaken is so magically commanding as if asking someone to awaken to all of the love in the universe, right now. 🙂

  7. Christina ~ says:

    Like a lover’s whisper….exquisitely written!

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