Awaken
A lover’s sigh now
On your lips
At first sight
An angel’s wings spread
Bringing light
Hold your breath
For fear these moments
Pass too soon
The sunlight
Is eclipsed now by
Pale, bright moon
© Helen Valentina 2014, All Rights Reserved
Awaken
A lover’s sigh now
On your lips
At first sight
An angel’s wings spread
Bringing light
Hold your breath
For fear these moments
Pass too soon
The sunlight
Is eclipsed now by
Pale, bright moon
© Helen Valentina 2014, All Rights Reserved
Like most people, I have a number of sides to me. The most interesting one probably emerges through my writing, hence this blog. I love to read, and also to write, and so this is a way to share both.
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So Beautiful, Helen 🙂 Just Love it!
Thank you!! 🙂 🙂
This is beautiful. Like a breath of clean air after smelling smog for days. 🙂
Wow, thank you, so kin!! 🙂 🙂
My pleasure!
Truly lovely, Sis! I needed to read this kind of beauty today!! 🙂
Thanks so much Sis!! 🙂 🙂 xxx
Nice, even at first sight. 🙂 (Btw, your title gives me an idea for a post…)
Cool, thanks!! 🙂 🙂
This is so stunning piece, Helen. 🙂
Thank you!! 🙂 🙂
Beautiful poem! I just love your first stanza; the word awaken is so magically commanding as if asking someone to awaken to all of the love in the universe, right now. 🙂
Thank you, that is very kind!! 🙂 🙂
Like a lover’s whisper….exquisitely written!
Thank you so much, that is very kind!! 🙂 🙂
Beautiful.
Thank you!! 🙂