I name you darkness
I name you death
I name you whispers
On dying breath
I name you coldness
I name you vice
I named you once and
I won’t name twice
I call your name now
I call you out
I call you certainty
Riddled by doubt
I call you wicked
I call you lost
I’ll call your piper
You name the cost
© Helen Valentina 2014, All Rights Reserved
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You are extremely talented!
Thank you, that is so kind!! 🙂 🙂
I love it!
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Love it, Sis! I agree…you are so talented!! 🙂 xxxx
Thanks Skye!! 🙂 :). Xxx
Chilly, but beautiful!
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Lovely Helen, I agree with the above comment, there is a very chilly feel about it.
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Sticks and stones… 🙂 Love it.
Rhyme, meter, flow, rhythm, tone, concept… it’s so hard to do one of these well in a poem. But it looks easy when you do because they all always come out so well. 🙂
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I call you certainty
Riddled by doubt
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w. o. w.
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Brilliant and that flow is incredible Helen =)
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It seems strangely complicated to respond to the .coms.. but I shall prevail, good stuff
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Fateful forbidding in this ominous piece. Skillful in theme and style Helen – well done.
Thanks Mike!! 🙂 🙂
Wonderfully written Helena, you have that touch and a way with words! God bless!
Thank you so much, that is very kind!! 🙂 🙂