Inside church

Inside church (Photo credit: veggiesosage)

This moment trembling
Before the choice to believe
Or withdraw
A greater light shining from this door
These hallowed halls are greeting me
And all these truths here meeting me
And should this moment fleeting be
I weep, I love, I fall
Surrender to it all

This moment reaching out
To light that shines on dust
And rivers on the floor
See all my life here spread before
A memory that’s calling me
How my poor life was stalling me
And now I love life endlessly
I weep, I love, I fall
Surrender to it all

Β© Helen Valentina 2013, All Rights Reserved

About Helen

I'm drawn to blogging as a way to share ideas and consider what makes us who we are. Whether it's in our working life or our creativity, expression is a means to connect.
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22 Responses to Surrender

  1. Morgan says:

    OH gorgeous…just gorgeous….I love this!!! I hope you do not mind, I must share this πŸ™‚

  2. 2flames1soul says:

    A Beautiful Surrender….

  3. Beautiful! Thank you so much!

  4. Beautiful. Thank you for sharing these lovely thoughts.

  5. This is lovely Helen, I do like poems that are reflective of your life, there is always so much in them.

  6. Spiritbath says:

    Well done! Just lovely.

  7. The most pleasant and precious moment in one’s life….when you surrender to it all! A life shared with Him….so very priceless! God bless!

  8. I love how your describe to a tee how it feels. πŸ™‚

  9. So lovely Helen and I adore the repeating line

  10. Skye says:

    Absolutely, positively loved this, Sis!!! πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

  11. Noora says:

    Loved this! So wonderfully composed. Great work – as usual.

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