Inside church (Photo credit: veggiesosage)
This moment trembling
Before the choice to believe
Or withdraw
A greater light shining from this door
These hallowed halls are greeting me
And all these truths here meeting me
And should this moment fleeting be
I weep, I love, I fall
Surrender to it all
This moment reaching out
To light that shines on dust
And rivers on the floor
See all my life here spread before
A memory that’s calling me
How my poor life was stalling me
And now I love life endlessly
I weep, I love, I fall
Surrender to it all
© Helen Valentina 2013, All Rights Reserved
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OH gorgeous…just gorgeous….I love this!!! I hope you do not mind, I must share this 🙂
Don’t mind at all, thank you so much!! 🙂 🙂
A Beautiful Surrender….
Thanks so much!! 🙂 🙂
Beautiful! Thank you so much!
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Beautiful. Thank you for sharing these lovely thoughts.
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This is lovely Helen, I do like poems that are reflective of your life, there is always so much in them.
Thanks so much Michael!! 🙂 🙂
Well done! Just lovely.
Thank you!! 🙂 🙂
The most pleasant and precious moment in one’s life….when you surrender to it all! A life shared with Him….so very priceless! God bless!
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I love how your describe to a tee how it feels. 🙂
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So lovely Helen and I adore the repeating line
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Absolutely, positively loved this, Sis!!! 🙂 🙂
Thanks so much Skye!! 🙂 🙂
Loved this! So wonderfully composed. Great work – as usual.
Thanks Noora!! 🙂 🙂