Intruders

They come at night
They bite
They’re shuddering
With sin
A wraith, a ghost
They boast
They’ll take us all
We’ll fall

Intruders deep
They creep
I cannot weep
Nor sleep
I cannot breathe
Please leave
I’ve paid the cost
But lost

They come at night
They bite
Their darkened glow
Won’t go
They’re so near
I fear
They come at night
They bite

© Helen Valentina 2013, All Rights Reserved

About helenvalentina

Like most people, I have a number of sides to me. The most interesting one probably emerges through my writing, hence this blog. I love to read, and also to write, and so this is a way to share both.
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10 Responses to Intruders

  1. For some reason, I keep thinking of spiders in the dark.

  2. Darn bedbugs, I’ve stayed in hotels where they seem to be complimentary instead of chocolates LOL 🙂

  3. I had visions of the cockroaches i wrote about the other night…lol

  4. words4jp says:

    heebee jeebees – these are heebee jeebees – which can be anything and everything. 🙂

  5. Jerry B. says:

    Great imagery. I agree with words4jp, “heebee jeebees”. Each reading, it would evoke a new potential.
    -jb

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