One to Watch

Posted on October 31, 2013 by Helen
Shooting Star?

Shooting Star? (Photo credit: deltaMike)

One to watch
Star is rising
Shoot across sky
Buzz is building
PR pumping
Almost live or die

It’s gone viral
Inescapable
Everywhere you turn
Over-heated
Catch his arc now
Before he burns

© Helen Valentina 2013, All Rights Reserved

About Helen

I'm drawn to blogging as a way to share ideas and consider what makes us who we are. Whether it's in our working life or our creativity, expression is a means to connect.
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12 Responses to One to Watch

  1. The Story Reading Ape says:
    October 31, 2013 at 6:23 pm

    PHEW, that was a rapid rhyme Helen LOL 😀

    Reply
  2. MichelleMarie Antell says:
    October 31, 2013 at 7:03 pm

    OOOOO love this! All of it!

    Reply
  3. summerstommy2 says:
    October 31, 2013 at 9:15 pm

    I get this sense of two things happening, he literal and the figurative, and the figurative always interests me. Well done again my imagination is piqued.

    Reply
  4. Skye @ TheSanctuaryofMyHeart says:
    October 31, 2013 at 9:55 pm

    Oh, I liked this one very much!! Well done, Helen!! 🙂 xxxx

    Reply
  6. ramblingsfromamum says:
    November 1, 2013 at 5:38 am

    name up in lights – then a black out….. nicely penned Helen 😀

    Reply

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