Sadness

Distant

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I am a sadness without name
Tears are unshed from blue grey eyes
I am a candle without a flame
Dull recognition without surprise

Disconsolate dreaming without an aim
Where is the sky for this bird to arise?
Where is the child that this woman became
Where is the truth in this cobweb of lies?

I am a darkness no-one would claim
I am the contest bereft of a prize
I am a sadness without a name
I am the truth you won’t realise

Β© Helen Valentina 2013, All Rights Reserved

About helenvalentina

Like most people, I have a number of sides to me. The most interesting one probably emerges through my writing, hence this blog. I love to read, and also to write, and so this is a way to share both.
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8 Responses to Sadness

  1. I feel this……….

    huggs.

  2. ‘I am the truth you wont realise’ powerful conclusion Helen. This is a poem where i get the sense of the persona reaching out, pleading almost, excellent work.

  3. Skye says:

    Helen, this is incredibly accurate…..have been there….hoping not to return. Great work!

  4. Elaine says:

    Excellent and very descriptive!

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