Three Days

English: Arches National Park by Night.

English: Arches National Park by Night. (Photo credit: Wikipedia)

Three days deep
Rolling in my sleep
Closing eyes that weep
Secrets that I keep
Three days deep

Three days long
Moving with the throng
Praying to belong
Offering my song
Three days long

Three days dark
Like children in a park
Following a lark
Such a subtle spark
Three days dark

Three days lost
Didn’t count the cost
Or recognise the host
Who will bleed us most
Three days lost

© Helen Valentina 2013, All Rights Reserved

About Helen

I'm drawn to blogging as a way to share ideas and consider what makes us who we are. Whether it's in our working life or our creativity, expression is a means to connect.
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9 Responses to Three Days

  1. ‘Who will bleed us most’ I like that image, well done Helen, another engaging piece.

  2. Love the rhyme scheme and I agree that ‘Who will bleed us most’ is a fantastic line.

  3. Elaine says:

    Love this Helen. 🙂

  4. feralc4t says:

    Leaning towards the dark side again.. 😀

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