English: Arches National Park by Night. (Photo credit: Wikipedia)
Three days deep
Rolling in my sleep
Closing eyes that weep
Secrets that I keep
Three days deep
Three days long
Moving with the throng
Praying to belong
Offering my song
Three days long
Three days dark
Like children in a park
Following a lark
Such a subtle spark
Three days dark
Three days lost
Didn’t count the cost
Or recognise the host
Who will bleed us most
Three days lost
© Helen Valentina 2013, All Rights Reserved
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‘Who will bleed us most’ I like that image, well done Helen, another engaging piece.
Thanks so much!! 🙂 🙂
Love the rhyme scheme and I agree that ‘Who will bleed us most’ is a fantastic line.
Thanks so much Charles!! 🙂 🙂
Love this Helen. 🙂
Thanks so much!! 🙂 🙂
Leaning towards the dark side again.. 😀
LOL, yes, though it just came from the first line as a phrase in my head..often I don’t know what a poem is about or whether it’s light or dark till it’s written!! 🙂 🙂
Written from the heart, not the head 😀