Your eyes have wandered from me
Brevity
Your gaze a flickering moment
Lost to me
Within your regard I once dwelled
Blissfully
But now your words are given
Listlessly
The joy once shared is defeated by
Solemnity
And for the other women, from me
Enmity
I see your lust as broken, dark
Depravity
The funeral pyre of our love, now
Gravity
Where once I gathered all your time so
Fruitfully
Now any moments given are just offered
Dutifully
I once would have declared such doubt as
Heresy
But now my only feeling left is
Jealousy
(c) Helen Valentina 2013, All Rights Reserved
This really hit home for me, Sis. You have an amazing way of doing that. Excellent poem. xxxx π
Thanks dear Sis!! π xxxx
I feel that pain. Awesomely written.
Thanks so much Paul!! π π
Now any moments given are just offered
Dutifully —— Venus in Libra
Yes, very apt – absolutely the right astrological association for the poem!! π π
Such a sad and bitter poem. The word “dutifully” stood out to me, so sad that it’s no longer love just a sense of duty that keeps them together π¦ A really powerful poem.
Thank you so much – it is sad when love becomes duty, it is like the last dying of the light… π
You are so right when it becomes obligatory it is dead…
Very true, thanks so much!! π π