
Acitrezza Faraglioni Moon Rise Sicilia Italy Italia – Creative Commons by gnuckx (Photo credit: gnuckx)
Like the mystic
Let me fall
A time of unity
Yet recall
To the Beloved
Let me cleave
Let the ego
Perish, leave
Let the spirit
In me shine
Nought for me
For all is Thine
In these moments
We commune
You shine as sun
I glow as moon
(c) Helen Valentina 2013, All Rights Reserved
Beautiful!!
Thanks so much!! 🙂 🙂
Gorgeous!!!! Well done, Sis!!
Thanks so much Sis!! 🙂 🙂 xxx
a lovely play on rhyme 🙂
Thanks so much! 🙂 🙂
Love the theme of support here. Would be a wonderful world if everyone found a beloved such as this.
Thanks John!!! 🙂 🙂
I love this. So beautiful 🙂
Thanks so much!! 🙂 🙂
very beautiful words lovely poem
Thank you!!! 🙂 🙂
my pleasure
“We commune
You shine as sun
I glow as moon”
lovely…a true partnership
Yes, that was exactly what I was trying to describe, so thank you so much for your kind words!! 🙂 🙂
“In these moments
We commune
You shine as sun
I glow as moon”
……. I’m in awe! This is so beautiful poem, Helen.
Thank you so much!! 🙂 🙂