Echo

Posted on July 3, 2013 by Helen
Echo and Narcissus (1903), a Pre-Raphaelite in...

Echo and Narcissus (1903), a Pre-Raphaelite interpretation by John William Waterhouse (Photo credit: Wikipedia)

I can hear you
Reverberate
Separate from me
Thoughts we share
Flying
Spectacularly free
Repeating the message
Are you me?
Are you me?

Twin notes
Repeating now
Across the sky
Echo is vital
Wondering why
Repeating the message
You am I
You am I.

Splashing lights
Shadows that
Wink at the sun
All of this
Melody
Has it begun?
Repeating the message
We are One
We are One

(c) Helen Valentina 2013, All Rights Reserved

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I'm drawn to blogging as a way to share ideas and consider what makes us who we are. Whether it's in our working life or our creativity, expression is a means to connect.
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16 Responses to Echo

  1. Oloriel's avatar Oloriel says:
    July 3, 2013 at 7:16 pm

    Very poignant,I really liked it:D

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  3. Brian Hughes's avatar Brian Hughes says:
    July 3, 2013 at 7:25 pm

    Can’t say as I’ve ever fallen in love with my own reflection. I’m the only person I know who looked into a river once and the water shattered.

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  4. words4jp's avatar words4jp says:
    July 3, 2013 at 10:04 pm

    Very pretty 🙂

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  5. Jon Petruschke's avatar Jon Petruschke says:
    July 4, 2013 at 3:58 am

    I really like Are you me? Are you me?!

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  6. mandytigre's avatar mandycregan says:
    July 4, 2013 at 4:48 am

    beautiful– thank you.

    Reply
  7. Geo Sans's avatar Geo Sans says:
    July 4, 2013 at 4:51 am

    such
    elegance
    ~
    flowing

    Reply
  8. invisibleme's avatar invisibleme says:
    July 4, 2013 at 5:57 am

    lovely…as always…you are a master word painter!!

    Reply

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