Echo and Narcissus (1903), a Pre-Raphaelite in...

Echo and Narcissus (1903), a Pre-Raphaelite interpretation by John William Waterhouse (Photo credit: Wikipedia)

I can hear you
Separate from me
Thoughts we share
Spectacularly free
Repeating the message
Are you me?
Are you me?

Twin notes
Repeating now
Across the sky
Echo is vital
Wondering why
Repeating the message
You am I
You am I.

Splashing lights
Shadows that
Wink at the sun
All of this
Has it begun?
Repeating the message
We are One
We are One

(c) Helen Valentina 2013, All Rights Reserved

About helenvalentina

Like most people, I have a number of sides to me. The most interesting one probably emerges through my writing, hence this blog. I love to read, and also to write, and so this is a way to share both.
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16 Responses to Echo

  1. Oloriel says:

    Very poignant,I really liked it:D

  2. Brian Hughes says:

    Can’t say as I’ve ever fallen in love with my own reflection. I’m the only person I know who looked into a river once and the water shattered.

  3. words4jp says:

    Very pretty πŸ™‚

  4. I really like Are you me? Are you me?!

  5. mandycregan says:

    beautiful– thank you.

  6. Geo Sans says:


  7. invisibleme says:

    lovely…as always…you are a master word painter!!

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