Love Bite

Vampyren, "The Vampire", by Edvard Munch

Vampyren, “The Vampire”, by Edvard Munch (Photo credit: Wikipedia)

Love bite
Red lips
Ice cold
Fingertips
Skin that’s
Almost blue
Embrace that
Chills you through

Love bite
Neck as lace
Bitter
Aftertaste
Night owl
Seeks the moon
Sated
Far too soon

(c) Helen Valentina, 2013, All Right Reserved

About helenvalentina

Like most people, I have a number of sides to me. The most interesting one probably emerges through my writing, hence this blog. I love to read, and also to write, and so this is a way to share both.
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29 Responses to Love Bite

  1. That made me want to go put on a turtleneck!! Great job, Helen!! πŸ™‚

  2. Oloriel says:

    A truly mystical write, I really enjoyed it.

  3. Brian Hughes says:

    I knew somebody who used to give himself love bites with a vacuum cleaner nozzle.

  4. howanxious says:

    A cold.. a sensual love bite.

  5. Office Diva says:

    Ooooh, I feel like putting on a turtleneck AND a scarf! Very nice work, definitely gave me the vampy creepers!

  6. lala1966 says:

    Whoo Hoo! lol, love it! β™₯

  7. Wow! Hickie? hahahahha……….. ummm…… yeah.

    ’tis getting warm in here (grins)

  8. boogiestu says:

    All night Owls are smiling, very nice πŸ˜‰

  9. reocochran says:

    This was very interesting and thank you for following my blog. I wish my posts were so exciting!

  10. K Cutler says:

    This is kick-ass

  11. didoisux says:

    You are just remarkable πŸ™‚

  12. ioniamartin says:

    I often do not comment because I believe I have said it all before. Sometimes there are just no words to describe the effect your words have on us readers. Amazing–inadequate description–but truly amazing

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