Haiku of the Unwanted


Sickness. (Photo credit: loicdupasquier)

Toothache calls/
Dentist phone number/on the wall

Sickness chills/
Toilet bowl haven/of the ill

Feel it snap/
Broken bone now that/won’t set back

Of the heart’s true anx/iety

(c) Helen Valentina 2013, All Rights Reserved

About helenvalentina

Like most people, I have a number of sides to me. The most interesting one probably emerges through my writing, hence this blog. I love to read, and also to write, and so this is a way to share both.
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10 Responses to Haiku of the Unwanted

  1. ‘Feel it snap’ reminds me of when I had wisdom teeth removed. Still get shivers about that.

  2. ksbeth says:

    expresses pain very well

  3. words4jp says:

    I can handle many pains. But the one that is the absolute worst is toothache pain. Oh my – I find I want to be shot dead!

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