Wine

English: Glass of Red Wine with a bottle of Re...

English: Glass of Red Wine with a bottle of Red Wine shot on a white background. (Photo credit: Wikipedia)

This wine has aged too much
Gone past its prime
The redness of its hue
Is soaked with time

This wine has soured its taste
Its time has passed
The toast that it may seek
Is fading fast

This wine is blood-red lies
Like twisted hearts
And all the connoisseurs
Will soon depart

This wine was never good
Its grapes were never fine
I see this love we lost
Is so much like this wine

(c) Helen Valentina 2013, All Rights Reserved

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13 Responses to Wine

  1. “I see this love we lost, is so much like this wine.” Sigh…..I know these thoughts well. Great poem, Helen. Big hugs. I am right there with you in these thoughts as of late.

  2. Brian Hughes's avatar Brian Hughes says:

    I prefer real ale myself.

  3. words4jp's avatar words4jp says:

    I know this feeling – though I do not drink wine. I can look at anything that rots to be the metaphor for a lost love.

  4. Excellent metaphor, the second to last stanza is my favorite =)

  5. Brilliant metaphor – nothing like gone-off wine or love!

  6. K Cutler's avatar K Cutler says:

    Damn girl, you’re in fire! Love it!

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