Plots and schemes
Nefarious dreams
Ace up sleeve
Poised to leave
False faced friend
Truth suspends
Melodrama
If you harm her
One way out
Moment’s doubt
Draw your gun
It’s begun
One left standing
So demanding
Truth re-framed
It’s just a game
(c) Helen Valentina 2013, All Rights Reserved
This reminds me of A Game of Thrones with all the plots and scheming. Though, I fear my mind’s biases lean toward that association inevitably. Regardless, well done!
Thank you – I’m very flattered by the comparison!! π π
Whoah!
Powerful stuff!! π
Thank you!! π π
I nominated you for the WordPress Family award, because I love absolutely everything you post. =)
Oh thank you so much, that is so kind of you! I am not sure I’ll have tme to follow up – my work life is crazy busy at the moment so I may not have time to follow through but please know how much I appreciate you thinking of me, your support and your kind words!! π π
I too have a busy schedule, and understand… I do not expect my nominees to follow with the whole thing, I simply liked the opportunity to thank those of you that make WordPress a wonderful place. Yours is my absolute favorite blog. You’re a wonderful writer and I look forward to your posts! π enjoy!
Oh, you are so kind! That is such a lovely thing to say! i am about to head off to work so I shall take those kind words with me like a shield for whatever the day may bring!! π π You have a wonderful, generous spirit my friend! π
Thank you! =) You’ve made my day! β€ Have a great day at work! =)
I have nominated you for the Best Moment Award please visit http://wp.me/p2Qoij-qZ for details (I know you don’t have the time, but just so you know)
Thank you so much!! Both for the very kind nomination and for your udnerstanding re my challenge with time at the moment. I appreciate both so much!! π π
Just want you to know I like your writing
Thank you!! π π
This felt like a modern day western
Thank you…I hadn’t thought about a western background but I can see what you mean…ah, the layers of writing, eh?? π
suspenseful )
Thank you!! π
Having just listened to some music by Ennio Morricone, the drawing the gun bit made me think of “The Good, The Bad and The Ugly”, lol. Which thinking about it can describe Truth quite well. Great Poem Helen!
Thank you!!! π π
I really love the way it reads out loud! Love the tension/drama awesome
Thank you so much!! π π
I nominated you for an award http://soadhachami.wordpress.com/2013/05/02/nominated-for-the-super-sweet-blogger-award-dragon-loyalty-award/
Thank you so much – that is so kind of you! For lack of time I may not be able to follow up but I do so appreciate the thought. π π
Short and sweet, Helen, but gooood! Nothing like having symbolism used in poetry to express one’s feelings in a cryptic way! π
Very true π Thanks so much!! π
This is so touching. Made me think of few memories of my past… Great.
Thank you so much!! π π
Hey. I have nominated you for the Super Sweet Award. You deserve it. Hereβs the link. You can accept it as you wish. Best wishes.
http://pallaksharma.wordpress.com/2013/05/02/super-sweet-award/
Wow! thank you so much, that is so kind of you! I’m not sure I’ll get a chance to follow up the nomination rules for lack of time at the moment but I do very much appreciate you thinking of me!! π π
You’re welcome π
You’re such a beautiful, beautiful brilliant writer, Helenvalentina. I would love very much to compose a poem-duet with you… would you?
That would be great! Do we arrange the process via email? If so feel free to email me. I would be delighted to work with you. π
I’ll send you an email.