Thirst

Drought 2011

Drought 2011 (Photo credit: Kecko)

A well run dry
No rain for days
Township thirst
Alcohol fuelled
Blistering sun
Robs all moisture
And life and love
From the ground

Seeking in dark caverns
Beginnings of light
Forgotten rivers
Deep within walls
Townsfolk mingle
Telling tales of old
While the most ancient
Among them
Dowse for water from brown earth

Your thirst has lasted days
No fluid can sate it
You hunger not for water
But the source
This town knows
Deep within its bones
That water you seek has gone
And will never
Return

(c) Helen Valentina 2013, All Rights Reserved

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I'm drawn to blogging as a way to share ideas and consider what makes us who we are. Whether it's in our working life or our creativity, expression is a means to connect.
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12 Responses to Thirst

  1. michael's avatar purple says:

    loved the story in this … but I also came away with a feeling that this is about more than just water πŸ™‚

  2. Loved this, Helen…….**runs and gets a glass of water or two** Hugs!!

  3. LiveLoved's avatar Kira says:

    I love the deeper meaning that you’ve gracefully hidden in your words! I got glimpse of the deeper and it left me thirsty for more πŸ™‚

  4. A the end it really hits you hard, excellent work, very profound, great metaphor =)

  5. Ionia Froment's avatar ioniamartin says:

    What amazes me continually about your work, is that no matter how many times I read the same piece over again, I get something different out of it every time. In other words I spend way too much time stalking your blog lol

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