Soul Needs – Haiku

Adversity calls
spirit; these hero soldiers
face uncertain dawn

Hunger crawls within
the heart; hunter primes his bow,
innocent prey falls

Blessed are those that
forgive; stone heart turns away
a graveyard angel

Faith trembles before
the altar; a moment of
dread belief begins

(c) Helen Valentina 2013, All Rights Reserved

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About Helen

I'm drawn to blogging as a way to share ideas and consider what makes us who we are. Whether it's in our working life or our creativity, expression is a means to connect.
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21 Responses to Soul Needs – Haiku

  1. Bri's avatar Bri says:

    Wow, that’s really good .

  2. Ajaytao2010's avatar ajaytao2010 says:

    I Nominate for Most Influential Blogger Award
    please accept and oblige

    http://ajaytao2010.wordpress.com/2013/03/31/most-influential-blogger-award/

    • Thank you so much – that is so kind of you! I have a few things I need to juggle today – last day of Easter holidays for those of us in Australia – but if I have time I will try to follow this up. If I don’t manage to today I know my week ahead at work will be a bit out of control, so if I do not follow up please know I am very grateful you thought of me. šŸ™‚

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  4. LiveLoved's avatar A2LSM says:

    You always have such descriptive imagery woven into your words!

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  6. Paloma's avatar jrosenberry1 says:

    Hello there! No pressure, no hurries, just a nod in your direction. I love your blog. I’ve nominated you for the Epically Awesome Award for Epic Awesomeness. You can read more at http://jrosenberry1.wordpress.com/2013/03/31/vilas-are-epic-milos-and-marko-are-epic/. (This award is pretty simple … ten things about yourself and nominate ten people. I only nominated five though!) AND you have your choice of TWO images to use for a badge! Happy Easter, and all the best to you!

    • Thank you so much – you are too kind to me. No sure if I’ll have time to follow up this weekend, but if not, thank you anyway, as I always appreciate your kindness and support. šŸ™‚

  7. thegodspark's avatar thegodspark says:

    Blessed are those that
    forgive; stone heart turns away
    a graveyard angel

    I really love the imagery and wording of that stanza.

  8. WordsFallFromMyEyes's avatar WordsFallFromMyEyes says:

    Chopped beautifully. Just, the way the words chop – beautiful. Great poem.

  9. Debaroon's avatar Debaroon says:

    That line speaks volumes….Faith trembles before the alter…Your thoughts sway like the pendulum, the build up is intense, and paddling….Nice work, Helen

  10. I am certainly jealous of your haiku ability as I still struggle šŸ˜‰

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