meditation (Photo credit: HaPe_Gera)
Body wash in coconut and lime
Soothe away all the days woes
So sublime
Trick the mind
With sense recollection
Of simpler times
A moment
Of complete mindfulness
When I stop
I pause
Between acts, thoughts
And dreams
And simply be
And how this simple aroma
Rises up to me
Where does my body end
And this smooth
Silken sensation begin?
Not carnal or primal
But pure
This scent takes me to
A childhood
I perhaps never
Really knew
And through this perfect
Glitch in time
I am renewed
(c) Helen Valentina 2013, All Rights Reserved
helenvalentina 
mmmm, coconut and lime is my total fav. 🙂
Hehehe..mine too! 🙂
Absolutely sensual!! I love it! Ooh La La *wink*
Thank you…I actually have a lime and coconut body wash and it is just heaven!! 🙂
I have nominated you for the Best Moment Award! Congrats on a really great blog! http://whenibecameanauthor.wordpress.com/2013/03/06/the-best-moment-award/
Thank you so much! that is so kind! I will check it out properly on the weekend as I am crazy busy at the moment. If I don’t have time to follow it through please know I really appreciate the thought, but as I said I’ll try to find time on the weekend (this week is so insane I’m falling behind in everything and barely have time to come back to my blog to reply to kind people like yourself who comment. 🙂 )
I’m just glad I got the chance to do something for you since you’ve been such a loyal follower to me!
sense perception is hard to capture. You’ve done a great job. I could see, hear and smell what you described. Very nice.
Thank you so much! 🙂
it’s almost as if i’m in the bath with you 😉
a great poem of the little things in life 🙂
LOL, thank you!!! :0 🙂
The first line “body wash in coconut and lime” sounds so soothing. I’ve been to the Caribbean and it seems they have coconut in just about every product. I love the smell. I brought back some suntan lotion from the islands and whenever I use it I’m brought right back to those white sandy beaches in the tropics.
Thank you – yes, the scent is divine. I love my coconut and lime bodywash!!! 🙂
serene and beautiful! 🙂
Thank you so much!! 🙂