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I
took you
by the hand
Hopeful, foolish
lost
Light
dazzling
Dance for me
till we both spin
down
I
trusted
your dear heart
not knowing you
well
You
held me
just one time
then disappeared
Gone
I
took you
at your word
Now this poor soul
knows
You
took me
for a fool
Dancing delight
Gone
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This is a wonderful form and lovely poem 🙂
Thank you! yes,i saw the form on another blog and thought it was very inspirational! 🙂 🙂
There is something exquisite about the form of the poem! Loved it!
Thank you so much, I found the form on another poet’s blog and was very inspired. 🙂 🙂
🙂
Very sad and magical. It does feel like a dance in a way.
Thanks Charles!! 🙂 🙂
Really nice form. And for the guy “You dirty rat.”
LOL, thanks John!! 🙂 🙂
But
You returned
Your senses regained
Rejoined your heart to mine
Completeness
😀
Oh, what a lovely ending! thank you!! 🙂 🙂
😀
Oh! That is sad but beautifully expressed. 🙂
Thank you!! 🙂
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I absolutely love this form, Sis! Love your words even more. 🙂
Thank you!! 🙂
Knowing too early, that’s a tough trick. 🙂
Yes indeed, thanks!! 🙂