I’ve been on your wait list
Far too long
I’ve been patient and longing
For a song
To be invited to the party
To belong
I’ve been on your wait list
Far too long
I’ve been standing patient
In the wings
I’ve been learning my lines
Practising
I’ve offered heart and blood here
Many things
I’ve been standing patient
In the wings
I’ve been on your wait list
For these years
Waiting for the time you turn
You appear
But this pattern’s holding
And I fear
I’ll still be on your wait list
Many years
© Helen Valentina 2013, All Rights Reserved
Such a situation hurts and you really captured that.
Thanks Charles!! 🙂 🙂
awww…. sad but wonderfully written Sis xxx
Thanks Roxi!! 🙂 🙂
Full of emotion. Well done. Beautiful.
Thank you!! 🙂 🙂
The big dumpster is the place for anyone who does this to a lady 🙂
Very true, thanks Chris!! 🙂 🙂
Expectation can hurt Helen. Beautifully expressed, i love the lyrical nature of so much of your poetry. Had I known I would have invited you to my birthday party…..
Oh, how kind! Thanks so much!! 🙂 🙂
The rhythm and words are amazing. Cudos!
Thanks so much!! 🙂 🙂
I feel this applies to alot of people, myself included. It’s a really terrible position that unfortunately happens alot and you captured it so nicely, amazing writing!
Thank you, so kind!! 🙂 🙂
youre welcome (: