Poising here
on the crest of waves
that won’t peak
Listening
for words from mouths
that won’t speak
Offering
your trembling soul
You’re refused
Here instead
are options displayed
you can’t choose
Denial
shown to you here as
hopefulness
Trickery
Nothing to gain now
but distress
© Helen Valentina 2013, All Rights Reserved
Denial, deception, trickery, distress go hand in hand so well and you have given me a clear sense of this. A love somewhat lost I would suggest. Well done Helen, so much once again to ponder!!
Thanks so much Michael!! 🙂 🙂
Years ago, but stayed in this position far too long…you explained it quite well.
Thanks so much!! 🙂
You describe, incredibly well, how it feels. Has my heart racing, but aching, too. Ancient history. 🙂
Thanks so much dear Skye!! 🙂 🙂
This piece and “The Fear” are just too phenomenal for words…
Wow, thank you, that is so very kind!! 🙂 🙂