Taken

Smile 2

Smile 2 (Photo credit: Wikipedia)

I was taken by your smile
Warm eyes crinkled
Deep etched dimples
Radiating something inner
That was laughing to be free

Azure eyes can really sparkle
When the lilt of silver laughter
Joins the image
So uniquely and so completely
Your own

I was taken by your warmth
Like a fire flaming softly
In deep winter
Keeping all the cold and monsters
Far away

Was taken by your smile
For it was completely other
Completely you and so, so bright
It simply beckoned
Me to stay

© Helen Valentina 2013, All Rights Reserved

About helenvalentina

Like most people, I have a number of sides to me. The most interesting one probably emerges through my writing, hence this blog. I love to read, and also to write, and so this is a way to share both.
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14 Responses to Taken

  1. Brian Hughes says:

    So good it came up twice in my reader.

  2. Oh, Sis! I love this one. Absolutely lovely.

  3. sknicholls says:

    What a lovely way to express the animation of pleasant emotion.

  4. howanxious says:

    Oh! A lovely write… made me smile. 🙂

  5. Love the pic. 😦 😦 😦 🙂 😦 😦 😦

  6. and I was taken by your poem. Hehehe.

  7. fibee5 says:

    🙂 well written 🙂 I especially love that opening stanza.

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