Gnawing need
Beyond our choice
Sweet desire
Finds its voice
Given nourishment
We rejoice
Craving, hunger
Beyond our choice
Stomach tightens
Dragging need
Isn’t gluttony
Or even greed
From this hell we
Must be freed
Grasping hunger
Dragging need
© Helen Valentina 2013, All Rights Reserved
I had that problem last time I ate vindaloo.
LOLOL!! 🙂
You have such a way with words! I envy you (not really, but felt right to say it) 🙂
Thank you, that is very kind! 🙂 🙂
I really like the tone of these poems.
Thanks Ionia!! 🙂 🙂
Do you ever find that more people Like Part 2 than Part 1? Just curious if this happens with anyone else. 🙂
I’ve never gone back to check – must do so! 🙂