Hotel Rooms

English: A corridor outside hotel rooms in the...

English: A corridor outside hotel rooms in the Hotel, . (Photo credit: Wikipedia)

Those days we met
In hotel rooms
And spent such lazy
Afternoons
We made our secrets
And promised twice
To fool all others
About our vice

We drank champagne
In silken sheets
Our favourite tunes
Played on repeat
A recipe for our
Dark, cold hearts
In lies and trickery
Is where it starts

Β© Helen Valentina 2013, All Rights Reserved

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19 Responses to Hotel Rooms

  1. Ionia Froment's avatar ioniamartin says:

    Imagery…you are so good at that

  2. Brian Hughes's avatar Brian Hughes says:

    The only hotel I ever stayed in was a B&B in Fleetwood when I couldn’t find a flat.

  3. You sneaky devil you. Well done.

  4. It starts so happily and then the ‘lies’ and such are brought forth… well played…

  5. Skye's avatar Skye says:

    Wow….Sis, this is awesome. πŸ™‚ xxxx

  6. Now that’s quite a cookbook. I love that recipe line. πŸ™‚

  7. Hector's avatar Hector says:

    Lovely πŸ™‚

  8. Che's avatar Aka Teraka says:

    πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€
    Very lovely.
    May I share this with you too?: http://akateraka.wordpress.com/2013/07/14/hotel/

  9. Paloma's avatar jrosenberry1 says:

    Wow … this is so delicious and sad at the same time — beautifully well written. πŸ™‚

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