Memories (Photo credit: Prathima Pingali)
I remember your deep, glittering eyes
Reaching mine
I remember your soft, beautiful voice
Trapped in time
I remember your pain, of such depth
Reaching out
I remember the passion, blood stricken
Leeching out
I remember the madness of guile
And delusion
I remember the others loyal
In their collusion
I remember the lies and truths
Lost for all
I remember your devilry
Siren call
I remember the innocence
I lost for all time
I host your sad memory
Within my rhyme
(c) Helen Valentina 2013, All Rights Reserved
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Quite a moving poiem.>KB
Thanks so much!! 🙂 🙂
Sigh. Moved me to tears, Sis. You are a beautiful soul with amazing depth….so proud of you and your writing. Hugs
Thanks Skye, your wonderful support is such a blessing! 🙂 🙂
You are very welcome!! 🙂
beautifully written once again.. I am deeply impressed by your poetic voice. 🙂
Thank you so much, that is so very kind, I really appreciate your support!! 🙂 🙂
Flowing, and beautifully thought. A choreograph of words. Great vision!
Thank you so much, that is very kind! 🙂 🙂
This resonates…
Thanks so much! 🙂 🙂
You’re going to have to stop writing these moving poems. I can’t leave stupid comments after them.
LOL, thank you Brian!! I enjoy your funny comments, they make me smile! 🙂
Oh wow Helen this is so haunting/moving and stunning!
Thanks so much!! 🙂 🙂
I love the structure – pacing the rhythm over two different lines makes it read uniquely, aided by your phrasing and rhyme. It’s splendid and a treat to read. Exceptional work Helen.
Thanks so much Mike, that’s so generous! 🙂 🙂
Helen, another lovely, evocative verse. 🙂
Thanks so much Melanie!! 🙂 🙂