Let’s dress in pyjamas
Toast marshmallows
Drink hot chocolate
By the fire
Let’s tell ghost stories
Till our eyes are wide
And our brittle smiles betray
We are now frightened
By ourselves
Even while we won’t admit it
Let’s put on music
From a decade ago
And dance and sing
Words we can’t quite remember
Let’s just be friends
In total innocence
For one last moment
While we can
(c) Helen Valentina 2013, All Rights Reserved
I absolutely love this!
Thank you!! 🙂 🙂
It captures the essence of friendship so nicely 🙂
Thanks again, so kind of you! 🙂
lovely
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Thanks so much!! 🙂 🙂
I agree while we can lets live and breathe and enjoy every moment.
Thank you!! 🙂 🙂
As long as I am breathing air, I hope to do all those things.
Cool, thanks Ray!! 🙂 🙂
Sleepover! I’ll bring my hot water bottle.
Cool!!! 🙂 🙂
You do wistful nostalgia so well…makes my heart ache.
Thank you, that is so kind! 🙂 🙂
Beautiful. That represents so many of my experiences in life. Thank you.
Thanks Erik!! 🙂 🙂
At last! Someone who writes poetry with depth and intelligence. Refreshing.
Oh wow…that is so kind, thank you so much!! 🙂 🙂
I love the enthusiasm with which you replied. Keep up the good work, Helen.
🙂
Thank you so much, Helen. Feel free to post comments.
Why do I picture this as a description of when me, you and Roxi get together finally? This was fantabulous!!!!! Loved it!
Great way of picturing our meeting whenever/wherever it occurs!! 🙂 🙂 xxx
Can’t wait!! 😀
Ghost stories….:/ happy to no u got freaked tooo 🙂 i thot i was the only 1 …
Yep, anyone pretending it wasn’t a bit scary was just lieing to save face!!! 🙂
haha .
I feel good.. Thanks for calming me down
That sounds wonderful Helen I definitely want to to do that!
Thanks!!! 🙂 🙂
I like the innocence that this poem is trying to hold on to, and I like how the innocence is already gone.
Thanks so much!! 🙂 🙂
Cozy camaraderie, full of youthful vibe. Love it Helen.
Thanks Mike! 🙂 🙂
Wouldn’t you rather tell humorous stories? Ghost stories are just too plumb scary…
LOL, you could tell both, but I am partial to a good ghost story!! 🙂 🙂
I see what you mean, definitely. But then the professor wouldn’t be able to go to sleep!
Sounds like a lovely time 🙂
Thank you!! 🙂 🙂
Love this poem, and also…I love your background wall paper. Ann
Thank you, so kind and generous of you!! 🙂 🙂