Left Alone . . . (Photo credit: NJ..)
I wanted you once
No more, no more
I needed you once
No more
I paced for you once
The floor, the floor
I turned to your heart
Implored
I believed in you once
Was blind, was blind
Didn’t know you’d be cruel
Not kind
So damage is all
We find, we find
And by tragedy
I’m defined
I fell for you once
No more, nor more
Infatuation will grow
No more
Where once there was love
Abhor, abhor
Where once was so much
No more
(c) Helen Valentina 2013, All Rights Reserved
helenvalentina 
truly lovely, i love this piece!
Thanks so much!! 🙂 🙂
Dark, yet intriguing and has a great flow.
Thanks so much Ionia! It had a kind of sing song quality when it came into my head. 🙂
Powerful Helen the repetition works brilliantly
Thank you so much!! 🙂 🙂
Love the repetition and flow of the poem. It really brings out a sense of sadness and defiance.
Thanks Charles!! 🙂 🙂
lovely strong emotions, but truly free? or I’m reflecting myself lol
Thanks so much!! 🙂 🙂