One word
Spoken in the hush
As evening falls
One kiss
Light on a cheek
In shadows
One promise
Broken before
It is made
One heart
Split at the core
Bereft
One word
Too quiet to hear
All is lost
(c) Helen Valentina 2013, All Rights Reserved
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And that word is ‘Bugger’. (Well, actually it’s probably not, but the alternative wouldn’t have been suitable for publication.)
LOL!!! 🙂 🙂
That is just perfect: poignant , to the point, and breathless!
Thank you so much!! 🙂 🙂
no problem!
Another musing to ponder Sis… very nice indeed xxxx
Thanks Roxi!!! 🙂 🙂
Sigh, a lost love. Expressed tenderly.
Thank you!! 🙂 🙂
I really didn’t want to read this tonight, but I think I was meant to read it! I just wrote one about how his one word makes me ponder going back. Yours reminds me that I shouldn’t. Thank you for writing this…even though I didn’t want to read it! lol
Thank you for reading, and also commenting!! 🙂 🙂
**sigh & ouch** I need a Helen hug…..and chocolate. Beautifully sad, Sis.
Thanks Skye!! 🙂 xxx
That is very Nice…But I wonder what is the ‘One Word’.. :-),May be ‘Love’
Good choice for the word! Thank you so much!! 🙂 🙂
This lyrical parquet of well-chosen, economical words forms an image that outshines the gravity of heartbreak. So good.
Thanks so much Mike!! 🙂 🙂
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Thanks so much John, that is very kind of you! 🙂 🙂