carnivale venezia golden lady (Photo credit: marjolein.visser)
Carnivale
Of carnivores
On with the show
Blood rich life
So adored
In depths below
Coloured lights
Creatures strange
Paraded for art
Souls are lost
To our cost
Stabbed through the heart
Carnivale
Of troubadours
Singing of sin
If you try
To now escape
You’re drawn further in
(c) Helen Valentina 2013, All Rights Reserved
helenvalentina 
A wonderfull read and the picture you chose went so well, it add a bit of extra spice to the atmosphere. Everything read here was so easy to imagine and relate to.
Thank you so much, that is so very kind of you! 🙂
consumers
consummate
consuming each other
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welcome
carnivores
welcome
Love it, definitely captures the spirit I was trying to convey! 🙂
Reasons why I avoid Carnivale. I always think there is an inside joke. My last one was in Koln and thought I was going to be eaten. Nice job
Thank you!! 🙂 🙂
Love, : “Carnivale
Of troubadours
Singing of sin”
Thanks so much!! 🙂 🙂
Excellent write dear Sis… especially the last verse 😉 xxxx
Thanks so much Roxi!! 🙂 🙂
You are so gifted and productive poet, Helen! I admire your way with words.
Thank you so much for your kind words! 🙂 🙂