Vertigo has caught me
rushing down
to fast approaching ground
Thoughts splinter
beating with my heart
Bones breaking
tearing me apart

Time released me
Something forgotten
lost for all time
Sweet oblivion
give me your embrace
Final death
let me see your face

I am no angel
Broken wings
beat lost and long
In this final
find the peace
of last sensation

(c) Helen Valentina 2013, All Rights Reserved

About helenvalentina

Like most people, I have a number of sides to me. The most interesting one probably emerges through my writing, hence this blog. I love to read, and also to write, and so this is a way to share both.
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13 Responses to Freefall

  1. Brian Hughes says:

    Some sort of parachute might be in order…

  2. ncreadergirl says:

    Very nice, I like this one a lot! Captures the essence of emotions running through your head when in a freefall – be it symbolic or actually!

  3. We’ll catch you when you fall Sis………… huggggs

  4. words4jp says:

    Reminds me of the Tom Petty song.

  5. words4jp says:

    This is great. The nights do feel like years don’t they? xx

  6. words4jp says:

    The heebeejeebees! Cute:)

  7. Solothefirst says:

    This seems somehow peaceful in the end

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