Moonlit Night (Photo credit: Daphne Borromeo [Back from hibernation])
Comes the whiplash-like sensation
When the rose begins to bloom
Comes the harbinger of doom
When the sun ascends the sky
Moon must bow and quiet, die
When the stars are seen again
Then the lunar goddess reigns
As the train now leaves the station
With a killer’s condemnation
See the darkness’s frustration
Bring to us the desecration
(c) Helen Valentina 2013, All Rights Reserved
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“Moon must bow and quiet, die” Best line! Love it.
Thanks so much Ray! 🙂
I have nominated you for the Always Here if You Need Me Award for not saying my poetry is lousy. Go here for details
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Thank you so much John, that is very kind of you, I really appreciate you thinking of me. Oh, and your poetry is great!!!! 🙂
another great one!
Thanks so much!! 🙂 🙂
Great rhyming rhythm as always, loved it! 🙂
Thank you!!!! 🙂 🙂
I love how your words interpret the picture, Helena.
Thank you so much! 🙂 🙂
Very poetic! vividly expressive of your thoughts and feelings. Thank you so much!
Thank you, much appreciated!! 🙂
always welcome! I loved it.
Beautiful poem and awesome blog too!
Thanks so much!! Love your blog too!! 🙂 🙂
This one almost demands to be read aloud. Well done!
Thanks so much, so much appreciated!! 🙂
I agree. I did read it aloud. It is even more perfect that way. xx
Thanks Skye, so kind of you!! 🙂 xx