Embrace (Photo credit: aarmono)
I shudder within
Translucent skin
I tremble above
The sighs of love
In terror I turn
Unable to learn
I climax, I fall
Lost to it all
The moment I breathe
I’m starting to leave
With never a word
So much may be heard
In loveplay I lost
My soul to my cost
Do not bid me sigh
I’ll never reply
Just let me here burn
I’ll never return
(c) Helen Valentina 2013, All Rights Reserved
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Wow that is intense Sis… love it! xxx
Thanks Roxi!! 🙂 🙂 xxx
WOW I had to hide behind my tree to shelter from the shockwave Helen 🙂
LOL, thanks!! 🙂 🙂
“Just let me here burn
I’ll never return”
Wow! I thoroughly enjoyed this wonderful piece. 🙂
Thank you so much!!! 🙂 🙂
Wowie Zowie, Sis!! Loved it. 🙂
Thanks Skye!!! huggss xxx 🙂
Beautifully moving. x
Thank you so much!! 🙂
Shudder, tremble, sigh, climax, fall and that’s just the opening! What follows is mere smoldering (do you live near Pompeii?). You take this piece from paroxysms of passion to simmering sorrow quickly and concisely. It is all the more pointed in its construct of short lines and direct statements. Very well done Helen.
Thanks Mike, so much appreciated!! 🙂 🙂
If the cost is too high is it still worth it. You inspire with lovely words.
Thank you so much, that is so kind! 🙂 🙂
Wow this is intense and sad and gorgeously written
Thank you!! 🙂 🙂
this appeals to my broken side, thus i can really connect with it:)
Thank you so much!! 🙂 🙂
you are welcome. xx