My love is a strange love
Not of this world
Said a strange young girl
My love is a deep well
Bottomless fall
Taking my all
My love is a lost hope
Reaching for souls
Cannot be whole
My love is a night flight
Borne upon wings
Broken heart sings
My love is a strange love
Not of this world
Said a strange young girl
(c) Helen Valentina 2013, All Rights Reserved
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I like this one Helen. The 1st and last verse repeat really resonates. (A trick I use in my poetry and my music). 🙂
Thanks Ray, much appreciated!! 🙂 🙂
[ Smiles ] Very beautiful!
Thanks so much!! 🙂 🙂
[ Smiles ] You are welcome!
Great poem and very moving. Keep up the awesome writing 🙂
Thank you so much!! 🙂 🙂
I love lyrical poems with repeating stanzas 🙂
Thank you!! 🙂
I like this one. You know what my mom used to call me, “Her little martian.” So I always felt like I was strange little girl not of this world. Don’t worry therapy has worked I know I’m not an alien these days! lol
LOL, thank you – perhaps there is an element of strangeness in most writers and its part of why we write! 🙂
I nominated you for the Semper Fidelis award. Find all the details here: http://whenibecameanauthor.wordpress.com/2013/05/21/semper-fidelis/
Thank you so much Briana, you are too kind to me!! Really appreciate your support! 🙂
You’re very welcome! And YOU are too kind to ME! I’m lucky to have you as a friend!
I think many of us can related to that ‘strange little girl’…. great write as always Sis …huggs xx
Thank you!! 🙂 🙂
Gorgeous! I am certainly the strange girl
LOL, I wrote this when I was very young and always remembered it…I think I was a strange girl back in the day too!! 😉
This is amazing Helen =) I will probably always be a strange girl
I’m probably a strange old girl now LOL..!! 🙂 🙂
You’re a wonderful strange old girl 😛 (not that I think you are old I plan to live to 120 so we are both just spring chickens haha)
LOL! 🙂
touches
upon a universal attraction
to elegant
strange
darkness
Thank you, yes! 🙂 🙂
I love the repetition and the whole mysterious feel to this poem
Thank you so much!! 🙂 🙂
Love this……signed, the strange young girl. 🙂
Thanks sis, hugggsss!! xxx 🙂 🙂