My Love

My love is a strange love
Not of this world
Said a strange young girl

My love is a deep well
Bottomless fall
Taking my all

My love is a lost hope
Reaching for souls
Cannot be whole

My love is a night flight
Borne upon wings
Broken heart sings

My love is a strange love
Not of this world
Said a strange young girl

(c) Helen Valentina 2013, All Rights Reserved

About Helen

I'm drawn to blogging as a way to share ideas and consider what makes us who we are. Whether it's in our working life or our creativity, expression is a means to connect.
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28 Responses to My Love

  1. Ray says:

    I like this one Helen. The 1st and last verse repeat really resonates. (A trick I use in my poetry and my music). 🙂

  2. Renard Moreau says:

    [ Smiles ] Very beautiful!

  3. Great poem and very moving. Keep up the awesome writing 🙂

  4. thegodspark says:

    I love lyrical poems with repeating stanzas 🙂

  5. Kira says:

    I like this one. You know what my mom used to call me, “Her little martian.” So I always felt like I was strange little girl not of this world. Don’t worry therapy has worked I know I’m not an alien these days! lol

  6. I nominated you for the Semper Fidelis award. Find all the details here:

  7. I think many of us can related to that ‘strange little girl’…. great write as always Sis …huggs xx

  8. Gorgeous! I am certainly the strange girl

  9. Geo Sans says:


    upon a universal attraction

    to elegant



  10. I love the repetition and the whole mysterious feel to this poem

  11. Love this……signed, the strange young girl. 🙂

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