17 Responses to Precious

1. Pamela Beckford says:

   April 20, 2013 at 7:33 pm

   I never thought I enjoyed poetry before, but your poems just seem to flow into my soul. Thank you for sharing

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   • helenvalentina says:

     April 20, 2013 at 9:47 pm

     Oh wow, how very kind of you, thank you so much!! 🙂

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2. Charles Yallowitz says:

   April 20, 2013 at 8:08 pm

   Perfect flow and rhythm to your words.

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   • helenvalentina says:

     April 20, 2013 at 9:46 pm

     Thank you, that is so kind! 🙂

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3. EightLeggedGemini says:

   April 20, 2013 at 10:04 pm

   this reminds me of a cool song 🙂

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   • helenvalentina says:

     April 20, 2013 at 10:05 pm

     Thank you!! 🙂

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4. petitemagique says:

   April 20, 2013 at 10:47 pm

   This is so beautiful, it really touched my heart! Love it!

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   • helenvalentina says:

     April 20, 2013 at 10:48 pm

     Thank you so much!! 🙂 🙂

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5. Roxi St. Clair says:

   April 20, 2013 at 11:43 pm

   Beautifully written as always dear Helen 😉

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   • helenvalentina says:

     April 21, 2013 at 12:28 am

     Thanks so much!! 🙂

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6. Kira says:

   April 21, 2013 at 1:22 am

   I loved the cadence inherent in this poem 🙂

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   • helenvalentina says:

     April 21, 2013 at 1:31 am

     Thanks so much!! 🙂

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7. boogiestu says:

   April 21, 2013 at 4:17 am

   Like a soothing breeze of possible.

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   • helenvalentina says:

     April 21, 2013 at 6:47 am

     Thanks so much!! 🙂 🙂

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8. Ray says:

   April 21, 2013 at 10:42 am

   “Cleave now to me…” Wow. Very powerful imagery. Love this poem. Thank you for sharing.

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   • helenvalentina says:

     April 21, 2013 at 7:53 pm

     And thank you for reading, and your generous comments on this and other posts of mine! Truly appreciated! 🙂

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     • Ray says:

       April 21, 2013 at 8:11 pm

       Your stories and poems are a treat to read. Don’t stop writing.