Love Rites

Rose quartz illuminated
Procession of women
Of porcelain hue
Glowing with knowledge
And unity
The moment before
Sweet surrender
To the tones and pitch
Of love

Dark onyx undulates
Rings on broad fingers
Passing dark hooded eyes
Celebration of men
Awaiting their moment now
In the hallowed halls
Of love

(c) Helen Valentina 2013, All Rights Reserved

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16 Responses to Love Rites

  1. ohhhhh got goosebumps reading this…. beautiful Helen…. outstanding πŸ˜‰

  2. Beautiful poem. Love the use of stones at the beginning of the stanzas.

  3. It felt so light and then so dark…..I loved this Helen!! πŸ™‚

  4. Glynis's avatar Glynis says:

    That was beautifully dark! Enjoyed

  5. LiveLoved's avatar Kira says:

    Sweet surrender
    To the tones and pitch
    Of love
    …absolutely exquisite! πŸ™‚

  6. very nice use of language, very good

  7. Geo Sans's avatar Geo Sans says:

    your words

    hypnotically

    entrancing my soul

  8. kayuk's avatar kayuk says:

    I close my eyes and see them…lovely strong visuals.

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