Rose quartz illuminated
Procession of women
Of porcelain hue
Glowing with knowledge
And unity
The moment before
Sweet surrender
To the tones and pitch
Of love
Dark onyx undulates
Rings on broad fingers
Passing dark hooded eyes
Celebration of men
Awaiting their moment now
In the hallowed halls
Of love
(c) Helen Valentina 2013, All Rights Reserved
ohhhhh got goosebumps reading this…. beautiful Helen…. outstanding π
Thank you so much Roxi!! π
Beautiful poem. Love the use of stones at the beginning of the stanzas.
Thank you – yes, different types of stone with different meanings. π
It felt so light and then so dark…..I loved this Helen!! π
Thanks so much, it probably is rather dark actually, but its good if it seemed light or ambivalent at first! π
That was beautifully dark! Enjoyed
Thanks so much!! π
Sweet surrender
To the tones and pitch
Of love
…absolutely exquisite! π
Thank you so much!!! π π
very nice use of language, very good
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your words
hypnotically
entrancing my soul
Thank you so much!! π π
I close my eyes and see them…lovely strong visuals.
Thank you so much!! π