You

Physical bullying at school, as depicted in th...

Physical bullying at school, as depicted in the film Rebecca of Sunnybrook Farm. (Photo credit: Wikipedia)

You
Epitomise everything
You claim
To despise

Your lack
Of self-awareness
Is astonishingly
Comprehensive

Others in our midst
Consider you
A curious caricature
Of clueless conniving

Your plans
Are so transparent
Even polished glass
Seems foggy
By comparison

Your seething, blind
Despotism
Is it own holocaust
In the making

How pathetic
Your insecurities
Follow you
Like dis-embodied,Β defeated ghosts
Desperate in your wake

(c) Helen Valentina 2013, All Rights Reserved

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I'm drawn to blogging as a way to share ideas and consider what makes us who we are. Whether it's in our working life or our creativity, expression is a means to connect.
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12 Responses to You

  1. Ionia Froment's avatar ioniamartin says:

    Just found the follow by email button and clicked it. Look forward to reading more of your work. Have a lovely day.

  2. Bradley Corbett's avatar greenembers says:

    So um… did you write this about a boss? I know a few managers like this, lol.

  3. thegodspark's avatar thegodspark says:

    This is really really good. I’m not going to lie, I had to look up “Despotism.” The whole poem is really strong in execution. The last two stanzas I feel have the extra awesome factor going on. This one of my favorite poems of yours helenvalentina.

  4. thegodspark's avatar thegodspark says:

    *This is… sigh. lol

  5. Helen–the world is full of these. Wonderful dressing down.

  6. michael's avatar purple says:

    enjoyed it and could relate, BUT what got noticed by me tonight as I read this, could be my mood, LOL was the alliteration!! I loved it, a curious caricature of clueless conniving … yes, I know, less caffeine … hehehe great read

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