10 Responses to Dangerous

1. greenembers says:

   March 24, 2013 at 9:01 pm

   I got chills reading this. 😯

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   • helenvalentina says:

     March 25, 2013 at 6:37 am

     Thanks – was based on a nightmare, and yes, it was chilling! 🙂

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2. thegodspark says:

   March 25, 2013 at 5:05 am

   My favorite lines are:

   A wild heart
   Set to explode

   And

   Brutal heart
   That won’t relent

   I love it when words are few and they are strong, powerful and image provoking. This poem (like many of your other poems) is a great concept. It continually amazes me that you produce so many well written, awesome concept poems regularly. 🙂

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   • helenvalentina says:

     March 25, 2013 at 6:38 am

     Thank you so much…this one was based on a nightmare I had…not that one wishes for nightmares but they are good inspiration for darker poetry at times. 🙂

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3. Debaroon says:

   March 25, 2013 at 5:46 am

   OOOOOh u almost had me in the backseat, trembling…..awesome Helen

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   • helenvalentina says:

     March 25, 2013 at 6:38 am

     Thank you..in the nightmare that’s exactly where I was, and yes, trembling too… 🙂

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4. beautifuldreams42 says:

   March 25, 2013 at 9:03 pm

   This was so intense. You captured it perfectly.

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   • helenvalentina says:

     March 26, 2013 at 6:51 am

     Thank you – it was an intense nightmare I must admit. 🙂

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5. Rahul Ranjan says:

   March 26, 2013 at 2:25 pm

   Very smoothly rendered most of the risks involved in rash driving

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   • helenvalentina says:

     March 26, 2013 at 6:31 pm

     Thank you so much!! 🙂

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