Patience is
a virtue they say
so I wait
Hours pass
like a year or more
in a day
If you’d smile
turn your gaze to me
you would see
Moments now
without your gaze are
eternity
(c) Helen Valentina 2013, All Rights Reserved
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helenvalentina 
“here’s looking at you, kid … ” I know, I am only funny in my own mind, but … I liked the over-exaggeration, “like a year or more in a day” which brought a smile, and the sentiment of how one gaze equates to Eternity … 353 a shortened haiku form?
Thank you so much, and yes, it was meant to be the haiku form 🙂
Oh, I love this and have felt every word. Great work.
Thank you so much! 🙂 Unrequited love is such a painful but intensely inspiring topic for poetry. 🙂