Unity

Take my hand
Lead me to your heart
Let me rest

Take my heart
Let me lead you there
If you’ll come

Take this life
Simple offering
But profound

If we join
Greater than the parts
Is the sum

© Helen Valentina 2013, All Rights Reserved

About Helen

I'm drawn to blogging as a way to share ideas and consider what makes us who we are. Whether it's in our working life or our creativity, expression is a means to connect.
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16 Responses to Unity

  1. jit says:

    I wonder how you convulsed your beautiful thoughts in those simply written lines! How brisk and terse!…besides, it has the right universal and free appeal. It fits to any relationship between universal man to man or woman or any.

    • Thank you so much..it started as a kind of writing exercise, to keep it to a simple form, and evolved out of that. I’m so pleased that the economy and discipline I was trying to achieve didn’t lessen the message, so thank you so much for your comments. 🙂

  2. onceaperson says:

    Hi fellow writer!

    I have nominated you for the VERY INSPIRING BLOGGER AWARD! Please click on the link to accept this award and check out the rules. CONGRATULATIONS!!

    http://onceaperson.wordpress.com/

    • Thank you so much! I really appreciate the support and you thinking of me. Unfortunately my time is rather limited at the moment so I will need to regretfully decline, but I do really appreciate it so much. 🙂

  3. Much said in so few words! Lovely.

  4. I don’t know you, but in your writing I feel I knew you before. Let’s make together a better world!!!

  5. Reblogged this on Admiral of Reveries and commented:
    “Take this life/ Simple offering/ But profound” … Awesome!!!

  6. Christopher Shawbell says:

    Helen,
    Beautiful piece. Very organic flow to the verses. Your ending is perfectly punctuated. Well done!
    Thanks for coming to my site. I look forward to reading more of your work when It is not so late. See you here again soon.
    ~Chris

    • Thank you! I was very glad to find your site yesterday – both the poetry and now, this morning, also your short story/novella site. I love the genre you write in so will be visiting often I think! 🙂

  7. rawencounterswithestella says:

    “Greater than the parts of the sum.” Love it!!! Fabulous job, Helen!! 🙂

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