Failing Love

A brittle man whose heart was closed
Took more from life than he supposed
By drawing to him beauty rare
To make for him a world he chose

His soul it seemed beyond repair
He treated no-one with such care
To pay back all he seemed to seek
To make his give and take more fair

With honeyed words she heard him speak
But still she sensed his ardour weak
To heartfelt honesty so blind
To passion cold, to bravery meek

If he sought love then he must find
A way to comfort and be kind
For when no feeling is aligned
The heart that pauses, falls behind.

Β© Helen Valentina 2013, All Rights Reserved

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I'm drawn to blogging as a way to share ideas and consider what makes us who we are. Whether it's in our working life or our creativity, expression is a means to connect.
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5 Responses to Failing Love

  1. Beautifully written…. you can feel it tugging at your heartstrings..

  2. jit's avatar jit says:

    Well I read it twice, thrice, no, more than that…but nope….I’m not bored πŸ™‚

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