Aging

Each day so silent
Near imperceptible
The lines around my eyes
grow deeper,
more sustained
My body
just that bit more stiff
on rising
My recovery
just sightly slower
from exertion
Aging is a stealth bomb
Creeping up on you,
its countdown ticking silent
till it explodes in full force
And I find myself
surprised to be
in my second half century
Disoriented by passing years
gone too quickly
to recognise

(c) Helen Valentina 2013, All Rights Reserved

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I'm drawn to blogging as a way to share ideas and consider what makes us who we are. Whether it's in our working life or our creativity, expression is a means to connect.
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11 Responses to Aging

  1. “Each day so silent, Near imperceptible, The lines around my eyes, grow deeper”
    loved it

  2. first grey hairs, receding hairline, legs that argue with the faster gears of the bike,
    ahh the first flush of truth that youth is fleeting.

    • Yes, it creeps up on us all…when you are young it seems an alien concept, then suddenly one day, its all there..age has somehow just happened while you weren’t noticing, LOL! πŸ™‚

  3. myabsolutefragileessenceseries's avatar rawencounterswithestella says:

    Love it!!

  4. michael's avatar purple says:

    I am going to be looking over my shoulder NOW … IT will not sneak up on me!!! (oh wait … ) Such a truthful, well-written portrait we all can relate to! Of course, I am in DENIAL and I am not getting old … ever … πŸ™‚

  5. Uncle Tree's avatar Uncle Tree says:

    So very true, Helen. Keeping wrinkles
    under the radar is an art – especially
    without makeup. πŸ˜‰

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