Dragon Dream – for Prompt 40 Sheer Wonder


Adrift in city streets at night
No cars in sight
I’m calling to a distant light
These stars indeed might fall for me
They might

A single child lost in despair
With no-one there
As susseration splits the air
My feet are bare, but you
Might care

Above the cityscape it flies
A lonely prize
A dragon bright before my eyes
I’m not surprised, I called and
It replies

A fractured memory
A dream to me
And into daylight I proceed
You cannot see and yet recall

The ship that hovered overhead
Will know I’ve bled
In blistering light, such tears I’ve shed
And I’ve been led, my story yet

I know at last what this has been
A puppet in between
It’s one part beauty, one obscene
And all we might have been, a dance
A dream

(c) Helen Valentina 2014, All Rights Reserved

For mindlovesmiery’s prompt at: http://mindlovemisery.wordpress.com/2014/01/26/prompt-40-sheer-wonder/

This is based on an amazing dream I had recently which certainly made me feel sheer wonder on awaking and recalling it. :)

About helenvalentina

Like most people, I have a number of sides to me. The most interesting one probably emerges through my writing, hence this blog. I love to read, and also to write, and so this is a way to share both.
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19 Responses to Dragon Dream – for Prompt 40 Sheer Wonder

  1. Helen this is so beautiful the flow and rhytym just wraps you up and seduces the senses. What an amazing dream. I have felt a sense of wonder in dreams it was a great direction for the prompt

  2. Beautifully done Helen, dreams can take us to wonderful places. Very good indeed.

  3. How mystically marvellous ~ you are lucky to remember dreams. :-)

  4. What an amazing dream and incredible retelling of it!! Well done, Sis!!! :) Wow! xxxx

  5. Excellent poem. I was starting to think of Falcor from Neverending Story as I read it.

  6. Love the poem. If only I could visit that dream. :-)

  7. This was a very vivid dream and you captured it as if you were recording a live event. Really nice.

  8. osarobohenry says:

    Thanks so much for the follow and the like. I really appreciate. May the blessing of God never pass you by in the name of Jesus Christ

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